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Hello my name’s is detective Isabelle I’m here to speak about the crime which took place, on the thirty-first December, around twenty one o’clock first.
The scene took place in the bathroom probably on New Year’s Day because on the mirrors it is written “HAPPY NEW YEAR” the woman may have been getting ready for New Year’s Day.
The murderer may have entered by the window because the window is open, the murderer forget his knife and his lighter on the bathroom think.

The murderer slays her victim with his knife he forgot, the victim is filled with blood.
The victim had to quickly succumb to his injuries.
Here, we do not know better yet.


Quelqu'un pourrait-il me corriger les fautes svp ?

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ELISEDU593VIZ
la 1ere phrase il faut supprimer soit le 's soit le "is" car c'est la même chose
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Hello my name is detective Isabelle. I’m here to speak about the crime which took place, on the thirty-first of December, around twenty one o’clock.The scene took place in the bathroom probably on New Year’s Day, because on the mirrors it was written “HAPPY NEW YEAR”. The woman may have been getting ready for New Year’s Day. 
The murderer may have entered by the window because the window was open, the murderer forgot his knife and his lighter on the bathroom sink.

The murderer slayed his victim with his  knife that he forgot, the victim is bleeding excessively. 
The victim had to quickly succumb to her injuries. (jcp)(c bon je pense)
Currently, we don't know anything else.
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