L1, You miss me so much
L2, But many things make life really difficult in city
L4, qui est "we" ? expliquez et développez
L5,Fourteen not forteen
L8, We will be brought home
L9, after few months
L10, ne pas répéter deux new york remplacer le deuxième par "it's"
L10-11, The first thing I saw there was the statue of liberty
L12, pas "in" mais "at3 the beginning
L15, pas "difficulty" mais "difficulties"
L17, not "frinds" but "friends"
L20-23, I hope you come, I really would be very happy to see you at my side.
L23, I am waiting for you
