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Bonjours,j'ai un texte à faire en anglais et j'aimerais savoir si il y as des faute donc ce serai bien que quelqu'un ai la gentillesse de me corrigé.
voici mon texte :

Sam ysp is a spy,he spend his time sying and protect lot of people,saviour observe with a pair of binoculars such a secret agent he observed two men discussed and they exchanged a bag in a car parc. behind a car parc I see a meechanic he looking machiavellian,he prepareda bomb,when a spy see a crazy criminal,he run at full speed to protect a victim. unfortunately the saver is dead with a victim.
with several search we learn that a culprit is suffering from a pyromania deseases and that the victim has nothing to do with a problem , he is innocent , it's a coincidence.
merci beaucoup !

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Pas de soucis voici ma correction : 
Sam ysp is a spy,he spent his time to spy, and to protect a lot of people, the saviour observed with a pair of binoculars (such a secret agent!)  two men who discussed and exchanged a bag in a parking.
Behind this,I saw a mechanic who was looking machiavellian, because he prepared a bomb ! When the spy saw the crazy criminal, he ran at full speed to protect a victim. Unfortunately, the saver died in the same time as the victim.
With several researches, we learned that, the culprit was suffering from a pyromania desease, and that, the victim, was totally innocent : he was not implied in the situation :  It's was a coincidence.

Dans l'ensemble c'est plutôt bien, mais ducoup comme c'est de la narration j'ai tout mis au prétérit ^^
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