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Bonjour, pouvez-vous vérifier qu'il n'y ait aucune fautes svp ? Merci
d'avance.

She was not talkative and she was very shy. Talking to people was to her a
horror.
"What happened to me", she said.
She looked everywhere. Nothing. There was just this man. He has not moved.
his eyes were closed.
"It must be the tiredness", she thought.
She also wanted to close her eyes, and she did. It was nearly midnight.
Jane has no children and no family. she lives alone and she has no friends.
The hours passed and everything was quiet. During the night, a noise woke
Jane. She oppened slowly her eyes and she looked around her. There was
nobody else in the compartment, exept the man. He was awake. She had turned
her head one second, and sue discovered then that the man had disappeared..Pouvez-vous corriger les fautes d'orthographe mais aussi au niveau des
temps utilisés .. ?
Merci à vous, !!!!! Je dois le rendre demain !!!!!!

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MISSDAPBIJOUVIZ
She was not talkative and she was very shy. Talking to people was to her a
horror.
"What happened to me", she said.
She looked everywhere. Nothing. There was just this man. He has not moved.
his eyes were closed.
"It must be the tiredness", she thought.
She also wanted to close her eyes, and she did. It was nearly midnight.
Jane has no children and no family. she lived alone and had no friends.
The hours passed and everything was quiet. During the night, a noise woke up Jane. She oppened slowly her eyes and she looked around her. There was
nobody else in the compartment, exept the man. He was awake. She had turned
her head one second, and she discovered then that the man had disappeared..
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