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Rédaction 150 à 200 mots .
Sujet : The best holidays toi ever had : Tell about on typical day. Why did you like them ?
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On Friday the 6th of June , I had the best holiday. It was a typical day . I went to Ibiza with my friends and parents . When we got there we ate in the hotel then we went to the beach . In the afternoon , near 3pm , we ate in a very good restaurant . This holiday was fun , I got lots of presents , my dream became reality . Everyone was happy , we had the biggest party , there was people from all countries . It was awesome , we also had a swimming pool . I loved my holidays.