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Jessica is studying in high school, she has a hard time at school because her classmates doesn't like her much, and she has no friends. She loves for Peter, but Peter doesn't love her. So Jessica feels alone.Her parents are very worried about her and decided to have fun and lead his daughter and son to Disneyland. In the car her brother wanted to talk to her sister about her love for Peter but she didn't wanted to talk about it. At full speed the car had an accident because her mother did not control the situation. Her parents and brother are dead because of the accident. As for Jessica she survived and went into a coma. When she wakes up she felt alone because she could not see anyone around her or his parents or his brother. She does not know that they are dead, once she leaves the hospital to join her family, and she ran to the house and suddenly, she took off and flew.

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Jessica is studying in highschool, but she's having a rough time. She has no friends and her classmates don't like her so much. She is in love with Peter, but he isn't. So she really feels alone. Her parents are really getting worried for her and decide to go to Disneyland with both their daughter and son to have fun.  On the way, her brother wanted to talk to her sister about her  love feelings for Peter, but she refused to talk about it. The car was going too fast,her mother lost control of the car and they  had an accident. Both her parents and her brother died in the car crash.
Jessica was the only one to survive, but she went into a coma. When she woke up, she felt lonely, not knowing what had happened to her family.
When she left the hospital to join back her parents and her brother , she ran to her house and all at a sudden/suddenly/ took off and flew on the horizon. 

tu veux bien dire qu'elle a décollé et s'est envolée ????
j'espère ne pas avoir trop changé ton texte. Ce sont simplement des tournures de phrases.


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