Bonjour , je dois faire une rédaction en anglais sur les robots , j'ai commencé merci de me corriger et de m'aider pour faire d'autre phrase car je n'ai plus d'inspiration merci d'avance je dois faire (350 mots)


I Am writing today to talk about robots which exist since 2010.
Nowadays, there's many people that buying robots for their way of life.
It's the new technology.
First of all, I have a big robot, his name is Tony.
My robot is very young. It is very mature, intelligent,fulfilled, pessimistic and precocious.
It is really beneficial because it can take pictures, it can read your messages, it can talk with you and it can do many things.
They have multitasking and they keep company. They are time-saving!
On the other hand, it can be rebel if it works to much so it can be dangerous. Moreover, it uses a lot of electricity. From my point of view, it is very helpful, useful, necessary and efficient especially for the big families.
It is not just a robot, it is a member of your family !
I suggest you buying a robot on the Web because it is less expensive.
In 2025, they will be more and more robots everywhere in the world.
To my mind, it is very important to develop many robots especially for helping the disabled people and old people.

We can wonder if robots will replace us in the generations that will follow ?

Experts believe that robots can take over 47% of jobs that is to say Artificial Intelligence, automating, computers and many other things again.
They think also masses of people will be unemployed.
We must find a solution because the robots gradually begin to destroy humans with their knowledge.