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First, the positives of social networks that can communicate with friends from our school or other places. With a few clicks, you can send a message to our friend and open discussion. It can also post pictures or videos and even be live. Certain person share their live events. We can also be aware of the news in seconds, in the attacks in Belgium, with friends received a notification on social networks.
Then, the negative social networks are that they can cut the people of their immediate social environment. The permanent connection on social networks would paranoid and would create conflicts between individuals. This therefore to an impact on some youth who are all the time on their phones that can cause significant problems.
Finally, each person in his opinons on the topic of social networks. For me, the networks are not dangerous, it is convenient for us because we can quickly communicate with the person.