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Bonjour est-ce que vs pourriez le corriger mes erreurs svp.


I was in a European class at junior high school. I wanted to continue it at secondary school but it was too late when i came to register myself and I would really like to pursue this section this year. It is now to years since I have been studying English in this section, which has enabled me to acquire an appreciable level. My aim is to enrich knowledges and competences through the training of English. Up to now, the European section has satisfied my expectations and this is why I want to carry on studying within it. I always want to learn more. History is a subject I like a lot; to learn it in English is quite enthralling and enriching. To me, the finality is to obtain the best possible level during my studies, this competence being very useful to continue higher education like in the world of the company. This will also enable me to widen my circle of relationship through communicating with other Anglophone peoples and to discover various cultures.


I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favorable answer. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely.

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NATHEAVIZ
bonjour !

I was in an European class at junior high school.I wanted to continue going on that direction but I applied to late for secondary school (high school ??). I would really like to stay in an European section. I've been studying English since two years in this section which enabled me to gain / to develop  (to acquire = sens d'acquérir, acheter) a significant level. My aim is to  enlarge my knowdledge and my skills through English.
Up to now, the European section has satisfied/ realized my expectations (je trouve rien d'autre mais je cherche ) and this is the reason why I want to carry on studying this way. I really want to learn more and more as usual.  History is a subject I like a lot :  learning it in English is quite enthralling and enriching ( opens our minds even more).
To me, the purpose is to obtain the best level as possible during my studies. This skill will be very useful (of a great help) to always go higher 
like in the world of company (world of company ????pas assez clair...le mondes des affaires = business' world ???? je comprends pas ce que tu as voulu dire) . It will also help me (enable déjà utilisé) to widen my relationships through communication with any English-speaking people around the world and so, to discover other communities.

I look forward to hearing from you soon , and hoping for a favorable answer.
Thank you for your time and consideration
Yours faithfully

j'espère que ça t'ira. J'ai pas changé grand chose. Quelques mots comme to acquire et surtout alléger quelques phrases.
A toi de voir ce que tu en penses et si je ne t'ai pas trop "trahi"

bonne soirée
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