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Bonjour,
Pouvez vous juste corriger ma lettre à une amie? Merci!
Voici la lettre:
Dear Shanthal,
You know what? I am going to California, at Los Angeles to see a live concert of Lucy Hale! Then I suddenly realise that you also was a big fan of Lucy. So tell me if you are free on the 3rd December. We are going to have lots of fun.
Impatiently,
Emmy!<3
Merci d'avance! (URGENT POUR DEMAIN!)


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Bonjour , votre lettre n'a pas besoin de modification elle est parfaite bravo :p
"to see a live concert of Lucy hale"=> to see Lucy Hale's live concert

"realise"=> realised 

"you also was"=> you were also

"3rd december" =>   the third of december
"we are going to have lots of fun" => We would have lots of fun