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Bonjour bonjour, désoler de vous déranger mais j'aurais vraiment besoin d'aide. Je dois écrire un rapport complet de l'enquête sur Jack l’éventreur, j'ai déjà rédigé mon texte mais j'ai vraiment du mal à le traduire, et j'ai pas du tout confiance en les traducteurs comme Reverso ou Google Translate... Je dois le rendre demain, j'ai essayé de le rédiger en anglais mais je suis certaine que ça veut plus rien dire. Du coup ce serait vraiment vraiment hyper gentil si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à le corriger. Désolé, c'est un peu long, un peu pavé et certainement bourré de fautes... Un énorme merci d'avance.


The bodies of Mary Ann Nichols, Annie Chapman, Elizabeth Stride, Catherine Eddowes and Mary Jane Kelly were found to Whitechapel, between August and November, 1888.

Mary Ann Nichols was found on August 31st, 1888 at 3:40 am to Buck’s Row by Charles Cross. She had the clear-cut throat, the cut language and the cut belly.

Anni Chapman was found on September 8th, 1888 at 6 am to Hanbury Street by John Davis. She was lying near a door in the back court, with her cut throat, an abdominal mutilation and the taken womb.

Elizabeth Stride was found on September 30th, 1888 at 00:45 am to Dutfield Yard by Louis Diemschutz. She had the cut throat, but no mutilations.

Catherine Eddowes was found on September 30th, 1888 at 1:45 am in the corner southwest of the place Mitre by the policeman Edward Watkins. She had the cut throat, the abdominal mutilation, the womb and the taken left kidney.

Mary Jane Kelly was found on November 9th, 1888 at 10:45 am at her home, in 13 Millers’s Court by Thomas Bowyer, the assistant of Jhon McCarthy, owner of the room. This crime is the most morbid of those of Jack the Ripper. She had the cut throat, of severe mutilation and the abdominal mutilations, her heart was untraceable.

Bodies were examined by Dr Georges Phillips Baxter, except that of Nichols, who in summer examined by Henry Llewellyn.

There were several testimonies, but none was really useful. We know only a few things about him, all the testimonies were short and all were alike.

Thanks to some testimonies received and in autopsy, we have pus in knowledge any bit extra on the murderer, even if this description did not take forward the survey).

We say that Jack is a white, medium-sized man, between 20 and 40 years, left-handed, possessing a medical expertise. We think that he possesses a regular employment, because the murders all took place the weekend. He knows about it probably a lot about the anatomy. Some think that he is a butcher or a doctor. According to the testimonies, he carries elegant clothes.

This man killed only prostitutes. We also notice that most part of time, Jack put down the entrails of his victims on their right shoulder.

Jack the Ripper is also known under the name of "The Whitechapel Murderer" and "Tablier de Cuir". According to the policemen, this man would have committed five murders. After these murders, he suddenly stopped his activities. The identity of the killer was never discovered.

Seven suspects were questioned by the British police: prince Albert Victor of Wales, members of the royal family British, Sir William Gull, doctor and surgeon, Walter Sickert, painter and artist, James Maybrick, cotton trader, Francis J. Tumblety, doctor, Sir Leslie Melville Macnaghten, assistant commissioner of the police, and Wentworth Bell Smith, the Canadian doctor.

Many more people were suspected. But none were questioned.


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bonjour !
 The bodies of...........................................1

Mary Ann Nichol was found on August th 31st, 1888 at 3:40am in Buck's row by Charles Cross. Her throat, her tongue and her belly had been cut off
(quand tu dis clearly est ce que tu veux dire nettement ???dans ce cas in a "surgical way")

Annie Chapman was found on September the 8th, 1888 at 6am in Hanbury street by John Davis. She was lying down next to a door in a back yard. Her throat had been cut off and she had had an abdominal mutilarion to remove her womb.

Elizabet Stride  was found on September, the 30th, 1888  at 00:45 am in Dutfield Yard by Louis Diemschutz. Her throat had been cut off, but there were not any mutilations.

Catherine Eddowes was found on September the 30th, 1888 at 1:45 am in the southwest corner of the Mitre square by a policeman called Edward Watkin. . Again, she had her throat cut, an abdominal mutilation and her womb and the left kidney had been removed.

Mary Jane Kelly was found on November the 9th, 1888 at10:45 am at her home, 13 Millers' Court by Thomas Bowyer, by thomas Bowyer, assistant of John McCarthy, owner of the room. 
This was the most morbid crime of Jack the Ripper.
Besides her throat cut, she had severe mutilations not only in the abdomen and her heart was untraceable.

Bodies were examined by Dr Georges Phillips Baxter, except Nichol's body who was examined in summer by  Henry Llewellyn

There were several testimonies, but nothing really useful.
They were all similar  and quite short. Very few things were known about this man.

Thanks to some testimonies and the autopsy, we had (plus ????) more knowledge of the murderer and his acting way.

It is said that Jack the Ripper was a white , medium-size man , between 20 and 40 years old; probably left-handed and with medical knowledge. He probably had a regular job because the murders were always happening at night on weekends.
He knew what he was doing : he could have been a butcher or a doctor.
According the testimonies, he always wore elegant clothes.

This man was killing prostitutes only. We also noticed that most of the time, Jack was putting down the entrails of his victims on ther right shoulders

Après c'est ok

j'espère ne pas avoir fait d'erreurs (j'ai pas le temps de me relire correctement mais je le ferai ce soir)

bonne après midi :)