j'ai pas compris quand tu dis age moyen sinon moi j'ai fait ça :
John and Shanti decide to go to the beach on their little fishing boat for the week end , after a long time in their boat they decide to return in the sand for sitt and look the sunshine .they were looking it but suddenly they hear a scream someone was on the beach and this person was on a danger he was screaming a lot John and Shanti run to their fishing boat then they row and row up to the scream . they saw a girl who was trying to (remonter a la surface ) they look around to understand why she was sreaming and then they saw a hudge (requin blanc ) who was going to catch them they scream for the girl come to their boat and they row far like that she can gon on the little boat she saw them but the (requin blanc) was more far than ever he eat the girl suddenly and John and Shanti affraid try to go to the beach on rowing they were crying and sccreaming they were very affraid ... The (requin blanc gagnait de la vitesse) and was more close he attack the boat and on the scream of John shanti fall on the water and (rejoint l'autre fille) she was dead omg John was sad and affraid in his mind he was dead but for his girlfriend he decide to survive and row row row to the beach fortunattly a guy save him on kild the (requin blanc en lui jetant un ???? )
then John survive but loose his girlfriend...
