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bonsoir,
j'ai besoin de votre aide impérativement pour ceux qui sont extrêmement forts en Anglais. je devais raconter un film que j'ai vu sous forme de lettre. J'ai réussi à le faire cependant j'aimerai qu'une me le corrige parce que moi et l'anglais c'est une catastrophe. MERCI D'AVANCE !
PS: désolé pour les fautes d'orthographe
Dear unknown,
First, I decided to write to you a report on a movie that I saw during the holidays. This movie is called Fifty Shades of Grey. First of all, this story takes place principally in Seattle, she tells a relation between a young graduate Anastasia Steele and a businessman Christian Grey. The title has several meanings, “Grey” did make reference to one of the heroes of history, the color grey and a unit of temperature degrees. Moreover, this movie contains scenes clearly provocateur, romantic, sensual and libertine, which stages elements of sexual practices which involve the servitude, the discipline, the sadism and the masochism. Despite this, I loved this movie. To sum up, the story begun when Anastasia Steele accepts to replace her roommate Katherine, who was sick, for that she can interview the famous billionaire Christian Grey. The latter plays of his charm to intimidate her. Christian Grey is present like a young CEO charming, flattering, attractive and mysterious. During the interview, Anastasia falls under his charm and finds him attractive but she decides not to go further away. Suddenly, one day while she was working Christian Grey came to see has her work, it was a surprise to the young woman. Therefore, he invited her to the restaurant and of the beginning their love story. Whereas all take place well between them, Anastasia discovers that the man she loves is followed of BDSM (Bondage, Discipline, Sadomasochism). Anastasia has then to decide if she is ready or not to make compromises for the man who she loves.
Secondly, in my opinion, despite the negative criticisms of this movie, I am part that he appreciates it. Indeed, I had a favourite for this movie because the story of this young woman Anastasia marked me in the sense or for the first time, she sees him and falls under the charm of Christian, it is like this I was sitting in the place of the actress on the chair. The positive points are that the actors play their role well, I have as even a preference for Jamie Dornan alias Christian Grey, I find that he embodies well the young charming billionaire, attractive and mysterious. I also liked the duration of the full-length film, these two hours passed so much fast. The love story of these characters gives longing like and to meet her prince charming of the same way. What I also like very much it is the case, each good or bad moment there are musics that he accompanies the moment of the style “Haunted” of Beyoncé just as “love me like do” of Ellie Goulding. What’s my most also is that a young billionaire man falls in love with a young girl with the modest means this way. I make no secret, that at the first scene I would have liked to be in the place of the actress. The only negative point is that there were strange scenes and that the end was sad…
This didn’t really bother me since when I watched this movie I was alone. To conclude, this is one of the best movies I have seen in the erotic, drama and romance genres the sequel is going out this year, I also watched it and I fell in love, it was very different from the first one (fewer of scenes shocking). I am looking forward to being in 2018 to know this sequel, which coming more freed that’s why the title “Fifty Shades Freed”. I advise you, you will not be disappointed. Anastasia Steele was a really lucky
I look forward to hearing from you about this film very shortly
Yours faithfully
Alice Baker





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Bonjour, voilà quelques idées...j'espère que ça peut aider...attention de moins utiliser "the" ... bonne soirée

Dear unknown,

I decided to write to tell you about a movie that I saw during the holidays. This movie is called Fifty Shades of Grey. First of all, this story takes place principally in Seattle, and is about the relationship between a young graduate Anastasia Steele and a businessman Christian Grey.

The word "Grey" in the title has several meanings - “Grey” refers to an historical hero, the color grey is sometimes used to mean 'unclear,' and it is a unit of temperature. Moreover, this movie contains provocative, romantic, sensual and libertine scenes. In particular, it focuses on elements of sexual practices which involve servitude, discipline, sadism and masochism. Despite this, I loved this movie.

The story begins when Anastasia Steele agrees to replace her roommate Katherine, who is sick, at an interview with the famous billionaire Christian Grey. 
The latter uses his charm to intimidate her. Christian Grey comes across as a young CEO - charming, flattering, attractive and mysterious. During the interview, Anastasia falls under his charm and finds him attractive but she decides not to take it further. Suddenly, one day Christian Grey shows up at her office, which is a surprise for the young woman. He invites her to a restaurant and that is the beginning their love story.

Even though the relationship is going well, Anastasia discovers that the man she loves is into BDSM (Bondage, Discipline, Sadomasochism). Anastasia then has to decide if she is ready or not to make compromises for the man who she loves.

In my opinion, despite the negative criticisms given to this movie, I enjoyed it. It has become one of my favourite films because as I watched the story of this young woman Anastasia unfold, as she sees Christian and falls under his charm, I felt like I was sitting in the place of the actress on the chair.

The actors play their roles well, especially Jamie Dornan, alias Christian Grey. I find that he really embodies the young charming billionaire, so attractive and mysterious. I also liked the duration of the full-length film; the two hours passed  much too fast. The love story of these characters makes every girl long to meet her prince charming in the same way.

What I also liked very much how the music accompanies each good or bad moment, like “Haunted” by Beyoncé and “love me like do” by Ellie Goulding. I also really liked the idea that a young billionaire falls in love with a young girl with the modest means this way. I make no secret that at the first scene I would have liked to be in the place of the actress. The only negative point is that there were strange scenes and that the ending was sad…
This didn’t really bother me, though, since when I watched this movie I was alone.

To conclude, this is one of the best movies I have seen in the erotic, drama and romance genres. The sequel came out this year. I also watched it and I fell in love. It was very different from the first one (fewer shocking scenes). I am looking forward to 2018 to see the next sequel, which coming more freed (?) that’s why the title is “Fifty Shades Freed”. I recommend you see it! You will not be disappointed. Anastasia Steele was really lucky.

I look forward to hearing from you about this film very shortly.
Yours faithfully,
Alice Baker
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