Bonjour, j'aimerais savoir si il y des personnes qui parlent couramment anglais, pour me corriger mon oral de bac d'anglais. Pouvez vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes. Merci d'avance pour vos réponses


- Introduction :

I am going to talk about the idea of progress.
First of all, im going to give the definition of this notion.
The idea of progress can be defined as an improvement, a development or a change – a technical, scientific or social advancement which contributes to making the world a better place.
In English class, we studied several documents about the idea of progress and we talked mostly about technological progress, so i will focus my argument on this.
In order to illustrate this notion I have chosen to talk about the robot evolution.

Thus, we can wonder if will robots change and improve our lives in the future?

At first i will talk about the evolution of robots.
Secondly i will present the 3D Printer who Produces a revolutionary Robotic Hand

- Développement :

To begin, during this year, we have studied an interview called "Robot Evolution".
We have learn that the robot will be more like us because they will be able to recognise our expressions.
They will also be able to recognise the tone in your voice, to know wheter or note you sound angry or sad or happy. And so they will be able to do what they need to do in a way that is depedent on your mood. (For exemple, if you are unhappy, they will maybe try to cheer you up)

The journalist ask if robots will be smarter than we are. The interviewee answer that the robot chess computer was very good at playing chess, but if you asked it to walk down the stairs, it couldn't do that.


Finnaly, we have studied a repport By Nicholas Ravenscroft for Sky News. This report talk about the next revolution in medicine, the 3D printer used to make prosthetic hand.
We have learn that a company has combined 3D scanning and 3D printing to building custom-made prosthetic hands who is offering new hope for child amputees.
The development is significant because it means that sophisticated prosthetic hands could start to become affordable around £1,200.
The ones currently available, which do not use such relatively cheap techniques, cost anything from £10,000 to £70,000.
For children whose arms have been amputated, the price is a particular problem as the speed at which they grow means that they need a new robotic hand every 12 months.
Six-year-old Charlotte Nott, had both arms and legs amputated four years ago following meningococcal septicaemia.
Although she is remarkably dexterous with her stumps, her mother, Jenny, is worried about how she will manage as she reaches her teens and needs to fend for herself.
So, This project can really help Charlotte

- Conclusion :
I conclusion, the robots will change and improve our lives in the future.
Soon, robots could look and function similar to humans. They may become smarter than their creators.
We have also seen that robots participate in the progress of medicine.
In my opinion, the progress could be at the roots of a new world with new hopes. However, I hear people worried about machines taking our jobs and I agree with that.