Bonjour. je suis en 4° et j'aimerais bien qu on corrige ma rédaction d'anglais, en me disant les fautes de conjugaison ou de vocabulaire et surtout ne vous retenez pas,i dites moi tout ce qui vous gène.

One night, I was walking with my dog named Igor when suddenly I heard something. It
was a highpiched cries coming from somewhere in the alley. I was very terrified
because I couldn't see anything around me. So I hurried to get home with Igo. But
when I arrived in front of the door. I heard a footsteps behind me. I completely freaked
out. I was trying to open the door when I felt somebody touched my shoulder. I turned
and I saw a man. He explained to me that he had lost his key so he wanted me, if he
could wait his wife at home. We went home and he asked me a cup of tea. I had
swiched on the TV in the kitchen and I heard a escape alert : Attention, a dangerous
muderer has escaped from the prison, he has already killed several people.
I saw the murderer's photo. I stood, almost frozen, not knowing what to do because I
had understood that I was with a serial killer. All that time, I heard the door opened and
three men said : police, nobody moves !

Merci d'avance