Bonsoir, j'aurai besoin d'une personne qui est forte en anglais pour pouvoir me corriger mes fautes svp merci beaucoup :


Hello, my name is Lisa and I am a farmer on the planet MALA, on this planet, I have promoted organic farming to avoid that it is harmful for man but also for the environment. This method of agricultural production excludes the use of chemicals. So I managed to grow vegetables like beans, rocket, beets, because they are fast growing vegetables. For the fruit, it was a little more complicated because we did not anticipate this strong heat on this planet, despite that we managed to grow strawberries, which are my favorite fruits, who does not like strawberries? In addition, subsistence agriculture is being promoted, which is essentially an agriculture based on self-consumption. So we have a small group of five strong men who feed the 300 inhabitants, they are dressed in orange jumpsuit so that everyone recognizes them and that the orange color attracts the animals. With their overalls, they will hunt game and duck. Thanks to our knowledge and know-how, we feed all this population with pleasure, in return the inhabitants help us to pick the productions and to prepare the food. So there is a lot of jobs on this planet because there is no oil and therefore we have to use the plow, which is an agricultural tool used to plow with animal traction, here the animal is a cow. I have various instruments such as the harrow, which is a wooden instrument pulled by a horse, it is used to prepare the ground, painting it with its teeth, I also have a hoe, a fork and a sickle.