Bonsoir,

J'ai realisé un devoir d'anglais : un résumé d'histoire inventée. Pourrais-je avoir la correction de ce texte (si possible, une personne qui s'y connaît très bien en cette langue), notamment sur le récit ( si les temps utilisés sont les bons dépendant du contexte).
Sur ce, merci.
Voici le texte :

Estrellas woke up a day of fine morning, and as is her custom, after taking breakfast, she moved towards her personal library. All the same, she heard a conversation (tenue par) her parents in the living-room by the way, who intrigued her. Indeed, her father wanted to find a future heir to succeed him, because he had no son, what was bothering him for the future of the castle and the kingdom. In her library, Estrellas was thinking about it. She thought that she was able to govern. So, she wanted to prove to her parents, especially to her father that she could inherit those. So, she decided to tram the Dragon, like the knights, because indeed, her father decided to test all the knights, so that to choose the one who would come to tram the beast. Then, she conceived a plan. After hearing the existence of the magician who took the Dragon's land, she decided to contact him, in order to get some information about the beast. Problem. She didn't know who find the magician. However, she had observed her father who took a place where she had never been, it was forbidden for her. She thought that the magician must have positioned himself over there, in this secret place of the castle, and her father knew him so well ! So, she went to meet him taking this place forbid by trying to not to be seen by her parents. Then, she found him, and she asked him where is the Dragon by explaining him the reason of this. He didn't want to answer her because he considered that she wasn't able to tram the Dragon and it was too dangerous for her. Furthermore, he didn't want to get in trouble with her father, a good friend according to him. But she begged him, begged, begged, she was very unstoppable and relentless. So, he gave away to its desire and made her part of the magic formula to enter into the dark forest, where was the Dragon. Then, she went in her room and wore his uniform of horsewoman (she rode horses), and she went back to the wizard in the night. This latter sent her in the forest, in front of the transparent barrier, thanks to his magic filter. She recited formula, and penetred in. The place is really darkness, with fire everywhere. She saw big footsteps on the viscous sol and ran this, determined. She arrived in front of a kind of grotto. He was here. So, she entered by paying extremely attention [...]. She arrived in front of the castle, and the guards saw her, they warn the King and The Queen, concerned about her disappearance. They saw her daughter with the Dragon, subjected, and they were impressed, speechless. However, the King still got made with her. He was frightened for her. But, a few minutes later, he got over it, he loved hther daughter so much. Well, he and his mother put her in their arms. She explained to her parents she left the castle because she heard their conversation and she wanted to prove that she was able to succeed at her father. He realized that he had a daughter smart, brave, capable person, so she did belong as successor. Therefore, he raised his daughter with more responsibilities, required for proper functioning of kingdom's government. After the deaths of her parents, she became Queen.