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JENIFERJONATHANVIZ
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Bonjour je suis en seconde et j'ai un oral a passer Jeudi nous devons faire comme si nous etions dans un journal televiser et nous abordons le thème des jeux video.Moi je joue le rôle de la presentatrice et je voulaie savoir si mon texte avait un sens et si c'est jute.

Hello everyone! I'm Joyce, the presenter of "Geekshow" the favorite broadcast of all geeks!
Good today we will be interested in video-game.
For this Flin will tell us about the killing in the Unites states, because the violent is also caused by the video games!
(Flin parle des tueri au USA)...
Thanks Flin it was very interested!
Now our reporter will talk about the Game devloper convention.
(Eden parle en direct du game devloper de Francisco)
You're very lucky!It's look great!
So two testers Emineme et Dino will come on, for presenter two new video games each which are presenter in the video game convention!
(....)
I really love these two video games! It's really make me want to play it!
Ok now I'm going to interview our guest Sacha who was a former addicted to the video games!
-Do you regret having been addicted to the video games?
-Do you continue to play video games today?
-Are you afraid to fall back into your addiction?
-Did you find it hard to get back into a normal life?
-What advice can you give to an addict who wants to stop his addiction?
-And what advice would you give to teenagers so they don't fall into the addiction?
Encore Merci!!

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Une petite correction s'impose. 

Hello everyone! I'm Joyce, the presenter of "Geekshow" the favorite broadcast of all geeks!
Well today we'll focus our attention on video games.
In order to do this, Flin will speak about the violence taking place in the Unites states right now, because the violence is also caused by video games!
(Flin parle des tueries au USA)...
Many thanks Flin. It was very interesting!
Now our reporter will talk about the Game developer convention.
(Eden parle en direct du game devloper de Francisco) 
You're very lucky! It looks great!
So two testers Emineme et Dino will come on, for presenter two new video games each which are presenter in the video game convention!
(....)?
I really love these two video games! It really makes me want to play them both!
Ok now I'm going to interview our guest Sacha who was a former addict to video games!
-Do you regret having been addicted to video games?
-Do you continue to play video games as of today?
-Are you afraid of falling back into your addiction again?
-Did you find it hard to get back into a normal life?
-What advice can you give to an addict who wants to stop his addiction?
-And what advice would you give to teenagers so they don't fall into the addiction? 

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