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Bonjour j'aimerais savoir si mon texte n'a pas d'erreurs car c'est noté et ma prof est très sévère :

A few years ago, I went GERMANY when it was the Christmas holidays. I found that it was sublime and magic! I walked with my family in the cobbled street of Fribourg-en-Brisgau and I went to Christmas market for buy some reminder for my friends and my family. It was fabulous; I had like a lot because it was super, then I celebrated Christmas over there!

Afterwards, the country in which I would like to go is Italy because, my grandfather was Italian and spoke many of this country. I want know the culture of Italy and visit the tower of Pisa, the Coliseum and the Pantheon.

I would like learn and speak Italian. I’d go in Venice and would go on a gondola. With my family or my friends, we shall go to bathe at the beach. To finish, I shall go of this trip, I’m going to be happy in my mind.

Merci par avance !

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A few years ago, I went to Germany during the Christmas holidays. I thought it was sublime and magic! I walked with my family in the cobbled street of Fribourg-en-Brisgau and I went to the Christmas market to buy some gifts for my friends and my family. It was fabulous. I loved it so much that I celebrated Christmas over there! Afterwards, the country in which I would like to go is Italy because my grandfather was Italian and he told me a lot about this country. I want to know the culture of Italy and visit the tower of Pisa, the Coliseum and the Pantheon. I would like to learn how to speak Italian. I'd go in Venice and would go on a gondola. With my family or my friends, we shall go swimming at the beach. To conclude, I will go on this trip, and I'm going to be very happy. 
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