Bonjour j'ai un devoir d'anglais que j'ai terminées mais j'aimerais avoir une correction des fautes que j'ai pue faire dans mon devoir merci.


I welcome you ladies and gentlemen first of all thank you for coming so many I introduce myself my name is Jack I am a journalist come to talk to you about something that really shocked me I had to talk about what happens in a park located in Thailand I want to talk about the "Tiger Temple" in this park we can approach tiger who are apparently tamed. To start the tourists can feed tiger babies with a baby bottle you should know that the tiger cubs are ripped from their mother after 2 weeks while normally they are supposed to stay with for 2 years in addition the tiger cubs are fed all along of the day of milk until then reject some tiger is not exercised while he needs the tourists fun with some tiger is good for them but other are locked in small cages and do not can not practice more tigers are fed only with boiled chicken some tiger are overweight they should be fed with red meat to be able to have a good muscle development. You must know that what I am telling you here is only one example among you and I chose this one because tigers are animals that fascinate me and see them treated in this way for pleasure Tourism really shocked me but there are surely others. I decided to create the WAP Wild Animal Protection Association if you want to help wild animals that are badly treated in the parks or even the zoo just sign this petition that will ban the capture of wild animals whatever together we can act! Thank you for listening to me if you want to sign the petition please go to the host and for more information to hesitate to come ask me question