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Salut tout le monde j'aurai besoins de savoir si mon texte là est juste ( orthographe, conjugaison...) et si il est assez enthousiaste
Mercii ! :


Hey Coline, how are you today ? I have a very very very good news !! I won a weekend in New York. Oh my god it's so exciting, I think I'll go to Times Square to see the biggest neon lights of my life and go to one of the theaters: The Brodway Theaters. Then I will probably go for a ride in Central Park. After all that I will go see the Statue of Liberty I hope that's as beautiful as in the picture postcards. I promise I send you all of the pictures asap (as soon as possible).
Gotta go cu ;)
Mandy


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Ton texte est pas mal parcontre a la place de dire "very very very" il faut mieux dire "I have extraordinary news !"