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I/ Le pouvoir des blancs exercer sur les noirs d'Amérique

In the years XVIIth century, the whites always fought to maintain their power. Indeed, the blacks and the whites did not mix in America.

These faiths contrast with the declaration of independence on July 4th, 1776 which said that " all the men are create equal " as well as with the abolition of slavery fue abolished in 1863, the discrimination stayed always present remained legal during 100 years. The laws apparraisaient Jim Crows after the civil war, and forbade the blacks to be has side of a white in any place as school, buses ect..
So in 1986, the supreme court granted a new legislation by transforming her one "laws" separated but equals ".

Thus different laws were established as for example in certain regions the black people were deprived of their civil rights .Ils were forbidden for example in certain places as in the toilet public. It is what we were able to notice in the movie "hidden figure" where at the beginning Katerine Johnson a black scientist of the NASA apperçu very fast when the toilet of the blacks was separated from those of the whites.

To sum up, There was a real doggedness on the blacks. In spite of this situation to be begun to change by 1863, these events are the beginning of the fight of the Afro-Americans to obtain the power.

II/ Le contre pouvoir des noirs

However a force of opposition developed to face this oppression. We studied in class a concerning text " the civil right movement ". The movement of the civil rights ent walking of liberties gather numerous blacks to protest against the discrimination so that the blacks obtain equal rights in front of the law for the United States. Besides, we have blacks panthers, a revolutionary movement against the attacks of police, which went in the streets of California and followed the policemen during their rounds.
Black Panthers afterward one set up various initiatives to take forward the society and show the dissatisfaction. For example the program of health. This program consists in having services of ambulance free or screenings of diseases free. Besides, leading Malcom x of the " Nation of Islam " called for the separation of black and white americans. He was assasined in 1965. The black panthers also called for black power, employment full house, better housing and education, end of brutality ect police.
In spite of the company to be begun to evolve, Afro American are regularly a victim of violence.


III/ La Lutte acharnée contre la reconnaissance

Beyond the fight of the blacks of America for the power, certain people Blacks which fought for the gratitude of the whites. Let us take the example of this woman célébre named Rosa Parks who to fight against the racial segregation in 20 century. She was militant and refused to give her place to a white man in 1955 because she was exhausted being considered lower than the white. Besides, we know all these political heroes who changed the history. Let us take for example Martin Luther king an Afro-American as well as an activist for the civil rights of the Blacks in the United States with his speech I' m in dream "to restore hope of numerous people as we studied it in class.

Finally through the movie " hidden represent " study in class and present in the left premire, Katherine Johnson fue the first black woman to work on the NASA and in spite of its lack of gratitude at the beginning, she fought for being recognized. So thanks to these efforts, her obtained the gratitude of the blancsCes men people allowed a change of the history and the condition of the blacks today


Conclusion :
NUMEROUS people allowed a change of the history and the condition of the blacks today. They fought for their powers. They have permi to abolish the discrimination. In spite of today the racism and always the present, the various cultures can live together thanks to a long fight for legality.