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RAZANE2VIZ
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bonjour j'ai un sujet d'expression écrite en anglais j'aimerai qu'on vérifie svp si la syntaxe et l’orthographe et bonne également si je répond bien au sujet Merci:
sujet:
you must prenst an iconic figure of the fight for racial equality in the US. you must details about what happened to them or what action they took to furrther the cause. you must also justify yourchoice by explaining how that person epitomizes the struggle for equal rights and why you chose them. remember that the structure of your essay and the quality of your arguments examples will be taken into account.

mon expression:
Linda Brown is an Afro-American been born in February, 1942 in Topeka in the state of Kansas. We fight begin very early is just 11 years old she has to make measure in kilometres before joining her school yet a school was close from her home. Indeed during this time of segregation schools to separate the black and white. When Linda is refused at the request of registration, his father takes the initiative to respond finally against this inequitable law. Oliver Brown thus joins a collective recourse against the State of Kansas led by the NAACP (Defends the civil rights of the blacks). In 1950, create the Brown v association. Board of Education. Further to one first one failure near the Court of the State they join the case to the Supreme Court who agree with them. Thanks to Linda and her family runs her supreme declare ban on separation between blacks and whites in schools, in 1954. It is then a historic victory in the wrestling of the civil rights.
If I chose to present this figure it is mainly because she is a woman usually it’s spoken a lot about famous men such as Martin Luther king, Malcom X fighting for racial equality but seldom women are celebrated. I liked the solidarity pulled by this fight (13 families participated in the creation of the association).


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TINATIOUVIZ
Linda Brown was an Afro-American born in February 1942 in Topeka, Kansas. [We fight begin very early is just 11 years old she has to make measure in kilometres before joining her school yet a school was close from her home] Indeed during this time there was segregation in schools to separate the black and the white children. When Linda was refused [at the request of registration], her father took the initiative to speak out against the inequitable law. Oliver Brown then joined a collective recourse against the State of Kansas led by the NAACP (Defends the civil rights of black people). In 1950, he created the Brown v association. [ Board of Education.] After a first failure at the Court of the State they took the case to the Supreme Court who agreed with them. Thanks to Linda and her family the Supreme Court declared a ban on separation between blacks and whites in schools, in 1954. It is a historic victory in the fight for civil rights.
If I chose to present this figure it is mainly because she is a woman as usually we speak alot about famous men such as Martin Luther king, Malcom X fighting for racial equality but seldom are women celebrated. I like the solidarity shown by this fight (13 families participated in the creation of the association).


Voilà corrigé :) les points que je n’ai pas pu corriger car je comprenais pas ce que tu voulais dire sont entre crochets [ ]
Je trouve que tu réponds bien à la question :)

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