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Microsoft Corporation it is a Big and multinational computer technology company.

Microsoft was created on 4th of April 1975 in Albuquerque by Bill Gates and Paul Allen.

His principal activity is to develop and sold operating system, and software.

The company employ 120000 worker in 107 country.

Her slogan is Be what’s next “Prenez de l’avance”.

Microsoft is present whit other technologies for

example:”keyboard, mouse",Bing, msn,outlook, xbox 360,one.

I will present different windows create by Microsoft:

Windows:1.0,3,1 95,98,xp,7,10.

The first windows was made on 20th of November 1985

The first version of windows was start whith dos.

Dos is operating system but since 1990 his development was stopped .

The last operating system is windows 10.

Windows 10 is available since 2015

The goal of Microsoft was to had a computer working with windows in home of everybody

and in all company.This goal is almost reached with 90% de parts of market in world.

Microsoft deticated a part of his budget to make easy the use of windows.

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REYMAROUANEVIZ
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Microsoft Corporation is a Big and multinational computer technology company.
Microsoft was created on 4th of April 1975 in Albuquerque by Bill Gates and Paul Allen.
His principal's activity is to develop and sold operating system, and software. 
The company employs 120000 worker in 107 country.
Microsoft is present with other technologies for example: ”keyboard, mouse,Bing, msn,outlook, xbox 360one...
Here is some windows versions created by Microsoft :
Windows:1.0,3,1 95,98,xp,7,10.
The first windows was made on 20th of November 1985. 
The first one was started with dos.
Dos was an operating system till 1990 when his development was stopped .
The last operating system is windows 10.
It is available since 2015. 
The goal of Microsoft is to amplify a computer working with windows in every house and company in the world.This goal is almost reached with 90% of market in world.
Microsoft deticated a part of its budget to make an easy use of Windows.

Bon courage. 
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