Bonjour, est ce que quelqu'un pourrait corriger et me donner des idées à rajouter pour mon oral d'anglais de 3ème svp :

Hello, my name is Emma and I’m 14 years old. I was born in Lisieux, on the 26th of December 2003. I’m French and I live in France, in Bayeux. I have a little sister, and my parents are divorced. My sister's name is Margaux and she is 10. My mother is an accountant and my father is a professor. I have two cats and one goldfish.
I’m a small girl with brown hair and brown and green eyes. Every Saturday, I swim in a club. I like reading. I am interested in music. I love traveling, later I would go around the world. I’m very open minded, shy but daring, patient, resourceful, creative, strange, complicated, clumsy and forgetful, ambitious, autonomous, frank…