Bonsoir à tous, dans le cadre d'un devoir dans ma colonie de vacances, nous devons rédiger une lettre à quelqu'un, à nous de choisir. Je n'ai pas envie de me taper la honte quand on va corriger ma lettre donc quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider à corriger les fautes d'orthographe et de formulation de phrase. Merci d'avance.

Voici le texte :

Hello Damien, 
to begin with, I apologize for the misspellings. I speak fluent French, a little Spanish, and I have difficulties in English. My name is Clara, and I am French, I live in France in a city that is not far from Paris.
I was recently interested in Ukrainian and Russian culture.I do not know how to explain it, but these two cultures that are very different attract me. I would like to learn Russian, but I discourage a little because Russian and Ukrainian writing is different from French writing.
I later discovered your songs, finally your voice rather.I do not understand Russian at all, but your voice made me feel emotions, even if I did not understand the words. Your voice is just magical, it makes me travel and go to another world. The first song I listened to was the drunken sunshine. I felt several feelings, and I had a feeling a little sad and I love so much, there is nothing more beautiful than to feel emotions, feelings through a voice. Curious as I am, I listened to all your songs and I translated them into French so that I could understand the texts of yours musics. I am not a specialty of writing, but in my opinion the texts are qualities, each music, one can interpret it as we want, which leaves a freedom to listeners, it is the most beautiful freedom that a singer can give to his listeners. I do not know if it is you who write the lyrics of your songs, but the texts are awesome.

On the Internet, I read your story, and I have included the non-existent relationship you have with your father. Me, it's a bit like that, except that I had the chance to know him for a while, saw him very little, but it was better than Nothing. On the Internet, I read your story. I have included the non-existent relationship you have with your father. Me, it's a bit like that, except that I had the chance to know him for a while, saw him very little, but it was better than nothing. One day, I broke a bomb that destroyed the relationship between me and my father. Our stories are very different, but I admire you for your courage to face life without him. I've been through so many tough times like my mother's bipolar depression and your music made me go to another world. Whether you believe me or not, your voice is amazing. Thanks to your music I feel less alone, and I have no explanation to give you. I love you for your culture, your voice and your story.

I'd like to hear you sing in a concert, I owe you my strength. France is waiting for you! Which surprises me strongly, but if you want to continue this discussion, here's what to contact me:

Take care of yourself, talented.
Lilou