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hello everyone my name is nada. I would like to talk about my last summer vacation. I went with my family to Salé to visit my grandparents. I visited Marina Bourg without forgetting the walks we do every Saturday. I also went to the beach with my family.I also visited the city Rabat, we went to a library that is very famous and we visited challah, I was then I visited my aunt in Kenitra We have started our visit by the unmissable gardens of Chellah. I love this place, it is so beautiful, so calm, so full of history. The Chellah is an ancient necropolis, itself located on the site of an ancient Roman city. Several civilizations crossed there, the remains are magnificent. Just like the garden inside the ramparts. The Korrigans were captivated by the old stones.and finally we visited the companion.
The holiday were my favourite ,I did a lot of things like discover country , town and many things.


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Hello everyone, my name is Nada. I would like to talk about my last summer vacation. I went with my family to Salé to visit my grandparents. I visited Marina Bourg without forgetting the walks we do every Saturday[Elle est bizzare cette phrase: j'ai visité Marina Bourg sans oublier les trajets qu'on fait tout les samedis(?)]. I also went to the beach with my family.
I also[une répétition, remplace also par quelque chose d'autre: moreover(de plus) par exemple] visited the city Rabat, we went to a library which is very famous and we visited challah, then I visited my aunt in Kenitra.
We have started our visit by the unmissable gardens of Chellah. I love this place, it is so beautiful, so calm, so full of history. The Chellah is an ancient necropolis, itself located on the site of an ancient Roman city. Several civilizations crossed there, the remains are magnificent. Just like the garden inside the ramparts. The Korrigans were captivated by the old stones. And finally, we visited the companion[on a visité le compagnon?].
The holiday was grrat, I did a lot of things: I discovered country, town and other things.