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During my holidays with my family.

Last year I went with my family to my country of origin.
The first day we arrived by car of course it was really hot.
We were all tired so we all rested a few hours after eating.
After a few weeks of vacation my mother, my sister and I went in a city near my aunt.
It was too hot, there was a beach near the house.
We did picnics everyday of the beach and we also enjoyed the sea.
We mode the store we bourght several and things. We finally ate it was delicious
In the end it was cool funny I was happy but also sad because it was the last days of my vacation.

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NONOPOGVIZ

Last year, I went with my family to the country of my origins. The first day, we arrived by car  and it was really hot. We were all tired, so we all rested after eating. After a few weeks, my mother, sister and I went to a city near my aunt’s house. Always so hot, but hopefully there was a beach near the house. We picknicked everyday at the beach and we enjoyed the sea. We went to stores and bought several things. Finally, we ate and everything was delicious.

In the end, it was really cool and funny. I was happy. But to be honest, I was also a bit sad to go back and end those amazing holidays !  

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