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Bonjour voila j'ai corrigé quelques petites choses mais le texte est très bien!
The captain looked familiar to me, I thought I had already saw him when he laughed at us and said, “Ah ah, you scoundrels, you believed me! I'm Edward Teach, aka Blackbeard.” My classmates and I were surprised, how? So he lied to us! That's why this man seemed familiar to me, he was the terrible, rich, obnoxious Blackbeard who ruled the coasts of Carolina and Virginia with terror.
Blackbeard called his comrades, who outnumbered us. He asked them to fight us with the sword, and if we defeated them, he would offer us a rare treasure. But the fight was unfair and horrible, as they were really stronger and more gifted than us. It was a disaster! My companions were pushed into the water filled with dangerous creatures.
All my friends died because of that sadistic Blackbeard who said “Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, I think you lost the duel, my poor thief, now we're going to fight between captains.” Then, he came towards me, and immediately poked my eye out. I thought I would die in a moment, so I fainted, and didn't move. I felt so bad, I was hot, I was dizzy..... Blackbeard thought I was dead so he laughs and said “The sharks are gonna be happy to eat him!”
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