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Bonsoir j'ai une lettre de motivation à faire en Anglais pour demain mais je crois avoir fait beaucoup de fautes,quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à les corriger svp? :
I saw that you were looking for someone who graduated to perform this function for a period of 3years and then evolve in this environment.I have always liked being on the edge of people because I am very altruistic and I like to help in different ways. I did not have any professional experience in this field but I did however a 3 week internship with a social worker who has been practicing this function for 40 years so she recommended me a lot in this environment and now I know that it is the job that suits me.I hope to convince you for this job because I dream of this function for many years now . Merci d'avance !


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bsr,

I saw that you were looking for someone who graduated to perform this function for a period of 3years and then evolve in this environment. I have always liked being on the edge of people because I am very altruistic and I like to help in different ways. I did not have any professional experience in this field but I did, however, a 3-week internship with a social worker who has been practising this function for 40 years so she recommended me a lot in this environment and now I know that it is the job that suits me. I hope to convince you for this job because I dream of this function for many years now.

voilà, j'espère t'avoir aidé