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bonsoir pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait les amis j'aurais juste besoin que vous corrigiés mes phrases en anglais ,
merci.


Hello today I tell you about the school bullying that affects many people, myself I have experienced that. I started by explaining why we can be harassed I will end with the solitons and help that can be obtained, what can we get out

we can be harassed because we are not sociable with our peers, because we have another origin than them, or maybe because we are a little different or different from others, and it's like it starts with little words that hurts you at the beginning but becomes like a knife in the end but that really touches a lot, then it's the big words and the fights, even if it's the last thing you want You do not have the choice either you let yourself be hit and you do nothing, or like me you can fight, but there is a third solution that consider the best today, but when I was little the worst because j would have certainly been ashamed of it, is to talk to adults example teacher parents and the people who are there for that


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Hello , today i am going to talk about school bullying that affects many people . I myself experienced that. First , i am going to explain why we can be harassed , and then , i am going to talk about solutions and help that we can obtain , how can we be free , and get out from this problem.

So , we can be harassed because we are not sociable with people, because we have different origins than others , or maybe because we are a little different or different from others, and at the beginning  it starts with little words that hurt you but become like a knife at the end. It touches you a lot, then it's the big words and the fights.... even if it's the last thing you want , You do not have the choice either you let yourself be hit and do nothing. Or,  like me , you can fight, but this is the third solution considered like the "best" today. But when I was young , when i was a child , it was the worst ...because i would  certainly  been ashamed of it, it was to  talk about this with adults (for example:  teacher,  parents and persons who were here for that ).

Il y a peut-être encore quelques petites erreurs mais le plus gros est fait , j'ai aussi arrangé quelques phrases , voilà