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Bonsoir Pourriez vous me corriger mes faute svp merci d’avance

I have already started to do the procedure to get a US visa, I filled out the form and li the D-160 form filling guide I then paid the visa fee and finally I connect to my profile with the same login information as those used to pay my visa fees I made an appointment; I needed my passport number the CGI reference number received after the payment of my visa fee and the ten-digit bar code number on the confirmation page of DS-160 I selected the type of visa in I needed I grabbed my personal information add dependents, select the place of delivery of my documents then I confirm the payment of the visa and took my appointment I expect to receive it on my arrival at United States.

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SIMBAA13VIZ

Salut, j'ai corrigé ton texte et il m'a l'air correct sauf à un moment tu dit : I filled out the form ans li the D-160 form filling guide. Est ce que tu voulais pas plutôt dire and I read ?

Sinon le reste est correct, j'espère que j'ai pu t'aider ;)

AISSATAKONEVIZ

I have already started to do the procedure to get a US visa, I filled out the form and HAVE READ the D-160 form filling guide I then paid the visa fee and finally I connect to my profile with the same login information as those used to pay my visa fees I made an appointment; I needed my passport number the CGI reference number received after the payment of my visa fee and the ten-digit bar code number on the confirmation page of DS-160 I selected the type of visa  I needed I grabbed my personal information add dependents, select the place of delivery of my documents then I confirm the payment of the visa and took my appointment I expect to receive it on my arrival at United States.

Il est bien redigé ton texte sauf pour la parti dont tu as mis: li

et la parti: the type of visa in i needed

sa ne se di pas tu dois enlevé le in.

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