Bonjour,
J'aimerai un peu d'aide pour ma lettre en anglais. Donc la lettre devra comporter minimum 10 phrase à la voix passive.
J'ai fait la lettre mais j'aimerai quand même être corrigé au cas ou.
Donc juste svp me dire là ou je ne doit pas mettre a la voix passive et si jai bien 10 phrases,( si possible les eventuelles fautes en grammaire et orthographe).

Dear mother

I'm safe and sound, don't worry for me. I well tell you how was my journey. They was many childrens with me, our trains was attacked by air raids. So we were quickly evacuated to take refuge in Shelter, next to a country. Many childrens were badly hurt, but they weren't killed. Everybody were very effrayed, our train had many damage. I was very scared too. After one hour in terror, and incendiary bombs of german attacks, we were taken by host family. I was put with a good family. My living condition are good, but I wasn't eaten yesterday because I had a stomach ache. I hope this war will quickly finish, because I want to see you, you and father.
Take care of yourself.