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bonjour à tous

j'ai fais une redaction en anglais où je devais mettre (le comparatif , du preterit ,et du present perfect )

pour décrire mon appartement , pouvais me dire si j'ai bien ajouter ceux qui qui sont entre les parentheses svp car j'ai un doute
merci a tous de votre aide


I changed housing last year, in my new apartment, there are 3 bedrooms, my mother's is bright.
She a bed, a piece of furniture with a television, a small piece of furniture
In the hallway and the shelf inside the closet

This is a small bed is a table on a left, a furniture of television and the console of games, and a large table of 5 shelves.

the bathroom is white, there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths
a small piece of furniture to fix on the wall where can we store the toiletries and something else

the kitchen is average, there is a gas stove, a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, a kitchen furniture
there is a table, a sideboard, a cabinet of 4 shelves and another shelf
Last year, I changed my apartment in my new apartment, there are 3 bedrooms, my mother's is bright. She a bed, a piece of furniture with a television, a small piece of furniture
In the hallway and the shelf inside the closet
This is a small bed is a table on a left, a furniture of television and the console of games, and a large table of 5 shelves.
the bathroom is white, there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths
a small piece of furniture to fix on the wall where can we store the toiletries and something else
the kitchen is average, there is a gas stove, a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, a kitchen furniture
separate from the dining room there is a table, a sideboard, a cabinet of 4 shelves and another
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merci encore


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AYUDAVIZ

good morning.. :)

I changed housing last year => we moved house last year..  (preterit - ok)

in my new apartment, there are 3 bedrooms ; my mother's is bright. => my mother has got a brighter bedroom than mine (comparatif)

her bedroom contains a bed, a piece of furniture with a television and a small piece of furniture . (pour info : commode = chest of drawers - placard = cupbaord)        aucune consigne appliquée

In the hallway and the shelf inside the closet ther are a small bed, a table on the left, a television with a video games console, and a large table of 5 shelves.         aucune consigne appliquée

the bathroom is white ;  there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths  ; there is a small piece of furniture fixed on the wall where we can store the toiletries and something else .    aucune consigne d'appliquée

the kitchen has got an average size ; there are a gas stove, a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, a kitchen furniture .

there are a table, a sideboard, a cabinet of 4 shelves and another shelf .

il manque le present perfect..

Last year I moved to another apartment.  

My new apartment includes three bathrooms (That was my mother’s bright idea!), a bedroom, some furniture, a TV set on a low table.  The hallway is also nicely furnished with a closet containing a shelf.

In the bedroom there are a single bed (lit à une place) with bedside table on the left side. There are also a television table and a games consoles as well as a desk with five drawers.  

The bathroom is white, there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths.  There is a small piece of furniture fixed on the wall where toiletries and anything else can be stored.

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