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bonjour je suis en 5eme demain j ai un travaille a faire en anglais es que vous pouvez me dire si j ai des faute hey hello my name is yassine I live in manhattan more precisely near central park I do my studies in magnet scholl I'goinge on a foot because it's near to my home and I like make yoga in central park central park it's a big park in a big city and at night I go swimming in swimmbag

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Nan en vrai c bien juste ne met pas hey au début de phrase parce que sa marche pas c’est comme si tu dis bonjour bonjour . Mais aussi pas de e a going

Bonjour je te reformule ton texte correctement « hello my name is Yassine i live in manhattan more precisely near central park I do my studies in magnet school and i go there on my own because it is near my home and I like to do yoga in central park.Central park is a big park in a big city and at night i like to go swimming in the swimming pool >> voila j espère que ça t aidera bon courage