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Quelqu’Un qui a un bon niveau en anglais pourrait me dire s’il y a des erreurs dans mon exposer svp et s’il est compréhensible:

Introduction : Hello my name is Anne-Sophie I am studying management.
Today I'm going to introduce a famous TV show Which is called My family first. I enjoy this series and I've been watching it since I'm ten years old. My friends often talked to me about it. The characters are funny and always make me laugh. Moreover, the actors are talented.


development : My wife and Kids is an American Tv show which has one hundred and twenty three episodes. Each épisodes Last for twenty minutes. It was created by Don Romeo and Damon Wayans.
it is a series that has had a real success, with an audience of more than four million viewers.


It has been broadcast on ABC channel between two thousand and two thousand five.
In France, the series was broadcast from September twenty nine, two Thousand three on M6. The productor are Susan Cranck and Buddy Johnson, They are american producers.

Main actors are Damon Wayans, Tisha Campbell, George Olivier Gore, Parker McKenna Posey , and Jennifer Nicole Freeman.

the series takes place at the beginning of the Twenty-first centuries and takes place in the city of Stamford, located in the state of Connecticut.

The Kyle family is a family of five people, including Damon Wayans, who plays Mickael Kyle, he is the father of the family, he is forty years old, he owns a trucking company, he is very funny, and perfectionist, but he is sometimes stupid, and loves basketball a lot, he is married to Tisha Campbell, who plays Janet Kyle, she is the mother of the family, she is forty one years old, she does not work, she stays at home, to take care of her children, she is a woman who is complexed by her curves, she has a strong spirit of competitiveness, she is the mother of George Olivier Gore, who plays the role of Junior Kyle, he is sixteen years old, he is the eldest, he is considered the idiot of the family, he's in a relationship with a girl named Meagan Good, she plays Vanessa Scott, she's fifteen, she's nice, and calm, Junior is a rap fan, and he's a student, he's Parker McKenna Posey's older brother, who plays Claire Kyle, she's fourteen, she's a student, she's authoritarian, and she's in a relationship with Andrew McFarlane, who plays Tony Jefferson, he's sixteen years old, he's a sweet boy, he's polite, Claire is Jennifer Nicole Freeman's older sister, who plays Kady Kyle, she's eight years old, she's bilingual, she has a boyfriend named Noah Gray, who plays Franklin, he's nine years old, he loves playing the piano a lot, he's very talented and intelligent, and he wants to marry Kady

This series tells the story of a perfect family, very well off, who lives in a beautiful neighborhood. The children are very spoiled, and are difficult to manage, they are all the time arguing, Claire loves to attend a lot of boys.
Junior is a teenager who likes to make jokes, and Kady likes to do silly things, they are very difficult to handle.
The mother always does everything at home, her husband is always watching TV, or he plays basketball with these friends.

This is a really hilarious series, it shows us the daily life of a comic family, the actors are very funny, and play their roles well.

Conclusion: Today, I am presenting an American series that I have enjoyed enormously since I was nine years old. I’m a fan of these actors, so that’s why I wanted to talk to you about them.

I hope that my presentation has you more, thank you for listening to me.


Répondre :

salut, il me semble qu'il y est des erreurs comme is/are que tu as confondu après tout me semble compréhensible

-since I was ten years old

-my friends often talk to me about it

- each episode lasts 20 minutes

-it has been broadcasted on...

-the series was broadcasted on the 29th of September

-the producers are Susan...

-the main actors are [...] ( sans virgule) and Jennifer Nicole Freeman

- Twenty first century, in the city of Stamford...

- he is very funny, he loves basketball and he is a perfectionist but he can sometimes be stupid. He is married to Tisha Campbell...

- Janet Kyle[...] years old. She doesn’t work so she stays at home to take care of her children. Janet is is a woman who is complexed...

- they are arguing all the time

- . Clair loves to attend a lot of boys.

- with his friends

- In conclusion, this TV series shows us a daily life of a kindhearted, funny family but also shows us that family means everything to them. I recommend this series to anyone who loves to laugh and likes jokes, silly things and more like I do.

I hope that you enjoyed my presentation,

Thank you for your attention.

Voila c tout... bin courage!! :)