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KEZIAHCERTIFIEDVIZ
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Bonjour, je suis en seconde et j'ai un oral en anglais sur "My ideal city"
J'aurais besoin d'une correction s'il vous plait ( je dois utilisé du conditionnel ) :
" My ideal city would be located near the river. In the river would always be smooth and without danger. Fishing and hunting would be prohibited.
The climate would always be bright and a bit sunny. My ideal city might be like New York, it would be a melting pot. All communities would live in peace and no one would be left out. It would be a good place for everybody. There would be flat for city students and villas for families. Schools would be free up to university and activities outside of school would be free for people under 25. Near the schools, there would be a theatre, a library, a museum and a cinema.
In the city center there would be a stadium that can be used for different sports. There would be a natural park that everyone will maintain, where many teenagers could have fun with their friends. There would also be many shops for clothes, house, food… There would be a shop where people could adopt pets. My ideal city would also be unpolluted, everything would be environment-friendly : no plastics, waste sorting would be mandatory for all residents of the city. There would be a lot of green area and school children will plant tree shoots every year. All inhabitants would be respectful of the planet.
In my ideal city there would be no racism, no violence and no discrimination.
Everybody would be happy ! "

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CLAARISSE31VIZ

Heyyy, voilà une correction :)

My ideal city would be located near a river. The river would always be smooth and without any danger. Fishing and hunting would be prohibited.

The weather would always be bright and a bit sunny. My ideal city might be like New York, it would be a melting pot. All communities would live in peace and no one would be left out. It would be a good place for everyone. There would be appartments for city students and villas for families. Schools would be free up to university and activities outside of school would be free for people under 25. Near the schools, there would be a theatre, a library, a museum and a cinema.

Downtown, there would be a stadium that could be use for different sports. There would be a natural park that everyone will maintain, where many teenagers could have fun with their friends. There would also be many shops for clothes, furnitures, food… There would be a shop where people could adopt pets. My ideal city would also be unpolluted, everything would be environment-friendly : no plastics, waste sorting would be mandatory for all residents of the city. There would be a lot of green area and school children will plant tree shoots every year. All inhabitants would be respectful of the planet.

In my ideal city there would be no racism, no violence and no discrimination.

Everyone would be happy !

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