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Je ne pouvais réécrire ton texte donc j'ai indiqué les séquences où j'ai relevé des fautes:
This Monday morning, I had a maths class from 8 am to 8:55 am (le matin)
Then I had .....an English class .. .. we had a 20 minute break ( pas de “s” à minutes)
Right after 2 hours of sport class from 10 am to 12 pm
all students ran to the exit. ..... Lunch break ... I am an external student so I may leave the school and get home for lunch..... my young brother joined me at home for luncheon.....by 12:20 pm. My parents were already home and they cooked us a delicious meal. This Monday (today) Mom made me a hamburger with good fries accompanied by a homemade orange juice. I was a delight!!.....then I had to take the 1 pm tram for that purpose I had to leave at 12.50 pm so that I do not miss it. .... This afternoon I started by one-hour Spanish class, it’s a subject I really like. Then at 2 pm I carried with a physics-chemistry course.
At 3:50 pm I had a short break.............go straight to my physics classroom ..... the school rang. that was the end of the school day and I could get back home. I prepared a good snack for me and my brother .....I did my homework right after. prepared my judo outfit.
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