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Bonjour à tous, s'il vous plaît quelqu'un peut m'aider à améliorer ma synthèse d'anglais (surtout pour la conjugaison, c'est mon pire point faible) Merci d'avance !


Hello, today, the notion I am going to deal with is spaces and exchanges, in english class, we have studied the tourism and its impact on the environment. Because, nowadays, more and more people are able to travel across the world and, all this people wish to discover the world and its most exotic places.
I will try to answer the following question : “what are the various aspects of tourism?”
To do so, I will use documents that we have studied in class, but also other examples.


—-The Bali’s government economy Is based on tourism. It is one of the most popular destination in the world, mostly thanks to the heavenly aspect of these islands, therefore, hotels are always full and they consume too much water.
The consequence is that the population of bali, which is very poor, doesn’t have access to fresh water and have to browse miles and miles for one only bucket. The groundwater level decreases very fast and jeopardize the future of this region that might get dryer if the water’s over-consumption due to massive tourism doesn’t stop soon.

—- Another “paradise” is threatened by tourism, The galapagos islands, that have been spared from human presence for a long time, welcomes more than 200 000 tourists per year.
This massive tourism put in danger the wildlife of these islands that has one of the most exotic fauna. The giant turtles and iguanas often confuse garbage and plastic with food and can die of suffocation. The chosen solution for saving the wildlife but still allowing tourists to live an extraordinary stay is eco-tourism and limitation of visitors.

—- the next example is the document “should everest be closed?” and it shows us, on one hand, that the wildlife and natural landscapes does not match with massive tourism. Indeed, Mount Everest is the peak of the world, therefore, it is very attractive but this prestige makes a lot of tourist go there. They all want to explore the mountain and live a unique journey, but they throw a lot of garbage that causes the degradation of the landscape. On the other hand, it shows us how tourism can be a solution for a whole country, The nepalese government earns 50 000 pounds per group of hikers, and that’s one of the principal income source of Nepal.


—-The California also benefits of tourism, on 2006, when the tourism record was beaten, it has generated over 1 million of jobs because california had to prepare itself to over 84 millions of tourists in summer.
Tourism generated over 3.7 billions of dollars in one year and it allows this destination to improve and get better over the years.

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Hello, today, the concept that I will address is that of spaces and exchanges. In English class, we studied tourism and its impact on the environment. Because, nowadays, more and more people are able to travel around the world and these are the most exotic places.

I will try to answer the following question: "What are the different aspects of tourism?"

To do this, I will use the same, but also other examples.

--The Bali government economy is based on tourism. This is one of the most popular destinations in the world, and as a result, they consume too much water.

The consequence is that the population of Bali, which is very poor, does not have access to fresh water and has to travel kilometers and kilometers for a single bucket. The level of groundwater is decreasing very rapidly and is jeopardizing the future of this region which could be over if it is not over soon.

- Another "paradise" threatened by tourism, the Galapagos Islands, long spared by the human presence, welcome more than 200 000 tourists a year.

This massive tourism endangers the flora and fauna of these islands which have one of the most exotic fauna. Giant tortoises and iguanas often confuse garbage and plastic with food and may die of suffocation. The solution chosen to save wildlife is always available to tourists.

- the following example is the document "Should it ever be closed?" And this shows us, on the one hand, that the natural fauna and flora do not correspond to a massive tourism. Indeed, Mount Everest is the top of the world, so it is very attractive but this prestige makes many tourists go there. They all want to explore the mountain and live a unique journey. The Nepalese government earns £ 50,000 per group of hikers, which is one of Nepal's main sources of income.

California also benefits from tourism in 2006, when it generated more than one million jobs, with 84 million tourists in the summer.

Tourism has generated more than $ 3.7 billion in one year and one of them is helping this destination to improve and improve over the years.

traduction en français

Bonjour, aujourd’hui, le concept que je vais aborder est celui des espaces et des échanges. En classe d’anglais, nous avons étudié le tourisme et son impact sur l’environnement. Parce que, de nos jours, de plus en plus de gens sont capables de voyager dans le monde et que ce sont les endroits les plus exotiques.

Je vais essayer de répondre à la question suivante: "Quels sont les différents aspects du tourisme?"

Pour ce faire, je vais utiliser le même, mais aussi d'autres exemples.

--L'économie gouvernementale de Bali est basée sur le tourisme. C'est l'une des destinations les plus populaires au monde, et par conséquent, ils consomment trop d'eau.

La conséquence en est que la population de Bali, qui est très pauvre, n'a pas accès à l'eau douce et doit parcourir des kilomètres et des kilomètres pour un seul seau. Le niveau des eaux souterraines diminue très rapidement et met en péril l'avenir de cette région qui pourrait être terminée si ce n'est pas fini bientôt.

- Un autre "paradis" menacé par le tourisme, les îles Galapagos, longtemps épargnées par la présence humaine, accueillent plus de 200 000 touristes par an.

Ce tourisme massif met en péril la faune et la flore de ces îles qui possèdent l'une des faunes les plus exotiques. Les tortues géantes et les iguanes confondent souvent ordures et plastique avec de la nourriture et peuvent mourir de suffocation. La solution choisie pour sauver la faune est toujours disponible pour les touristes.

- l'exemple suivant est le document "devrait-il jamais être fermé?" Et cela nous montre, d'une part, que la faune et la flore naturelles ne correspondent pas à un tourisme massif. En effet, le mont Everest est le sommet du monde, il est donc très attrayant mais ce prestige fait que beaucoup de touristes s’y rendent. Ils veulent tous explorer la montagne et vivre un voyage unique. Le gouvernement népalais gagne 50 000 livres par groupe de randonneurs, ce qui est l'une des principales sources de revenus du Népal.

La Californie profite également du tourisme en 2006, année au cours de laquelle elle a généré plus d'un million d'emplois, avec 84 millions de touristes en été.

Le tourisme a généré plus de 3,7 milliards de dollars en un an et l’un d’eux permet à cette destination de s’améliorer et de s’améliorer au fil des ans.

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