Bonjour, j’ai fini mon devoirs en anglais pouvez-vous corriger mes erreurs s’il vous plaît merci d’avance.
First of all, I will introduce you to my hero, my hero Chris Gadner, because he is a father who has lost everything over time, but has not lost responsibility to his family.
I watched a film based on a true story, telling the story of a father and son in difficult situations. I'm going to tell you a little bit about this film, Chris.G is trying to sell an old and expensive technological device everywhere, but nobody buys it, so he can't make money and leaves him and stays alone with his little son. they sleep there; in parks, stations, even toilets. One day he meets the manager of a major stock exchange company and sees the opportunity to become an intern. Although he does not get paid during the internship period, he becomes an intern thinking that he will eventually find a good job. While he is experiencing all these difficulties, he never gives up hope and endeavors. I had no hope before watching the movie and I was bored. Chris.G is a hero to me, so he reminded me again to never give up whatever life has taught me a lot.
Ok alors je pense que c juste a part « of a father and his son » et aussi après quand tu dis « in difficult situations « il faudrait mieux mettre « in a difficult situation » voila et l’autre truck que g surligné je comprends pas ce que tu veux dire
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