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Jennifer is an ordinary girl but everything has changed her life.
21 April,it's the birthday of Jennifer. She went to school like she does everydays,that's where she met all of her friends,principaly Victor Sarah and Yanis. For her birthday her friends went Jennifer's house. The have good time laughted,ate and watched the TV.. Quickly,the night fell and her friends left..
So Jennifer was watching TV when suddenly she heard something fall on the ground. It was Ouidja board, Sarah had forgotten on the table. She's not worried because she was convincing that spirits doesn't exist in the world!
She sat on the bed and played.
Tomorrow,her parents open the door Jennifer's bedroom and a pretty girl disappeared..
Quelqu'un peut-il me corriger?

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It's Jennifer's birthday. She went to school like did everyday. This is were she met all her friends, principally Victor, Sarah and Yanis. For her birthday, her friends went to Jennifer's house. They had good time together, laughed, ate and watched TV. Quickly, night arrives and her friends left the house. Jennifer was watching TV when, suddenly, she heard something falling on the ground. It was Ouidja's board, that Sarah forgot on the table. She didn't get worried because she was convinced that spirits doesn't exist ! She sat on the bed and played. The next day, her parents opened her bedroom's door but the pretty girl wasn't here. She had disappeared.
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