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Bonjour !

Je dois inventer un super héros avec les plus d'informations possible sur
lui , j'ai déjà écris un texte j'aimerais qu'on m'aide à corriger mes
fautes et à me donner des idées si vous trouvez que quelque chose ne vas
pas. Merci My superheros is girl , her name is Eletric-gril (si vous en avez un autre,
c'est pas de refuse ) Her real name is Mélanie.

she is a tall and skinny. Electic-girl is clever , very fast and pretty
woman.

She's got a curly black hair . She wears a blue mask with cape with symbol
flash on his chest .

She is able to run very fast , teleport anywhere and read minds . She saves
poeple .

Morover she's in love with Brandon

( Quand elle ne se sert pas de ses pouvoirs elle s'occupe de sa famille )

Merci de bien vouloir me corriger


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My superheros is girl , her name is Eletric-gril
 Her real name is Mélanie.

she is tall and skinny. Electic-girl is clever , very fast and pretty
woman.

She has got a curly black hair . She wears a blue mask with cape with a symbol flash on his chest .

She is able to run very fast , teleport anywhere and read minds . She saves
people .

Morover she is  in love with Brandon

When she doesn't  use of her powers ,she deals with its family

"Electric Girl" is my super Hero. She's smart (or clever), beautiful and cute, her real name is Melanie. 
Melanie is a tall and slim girl, she has green eyes and short blond hair.
Electric Girl wears a blue mask and a pink cape with a symbol of flash on the chest.She has the ability to run faster than anyone else, teleport and she can read minds and she uses her force to help people anywhere :) and she always helps her family and friends 
Melanie and her classmate "Brandon" are in love with eachother :) 

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