Bonjour à tous enfaite j'ecris une texte en anglais en passe b-ing et passe simple svp je vous demande juste regarder est ce que j'ai bien ecris

In 2006, in California, at night, in the lake was found brutally mutilated corpse. This woman was the wife of a police officer Derek Hale. Derek had a serious investigation. Police reported that there was a murder, and the river was found the corpse of a woman. Derek and his partner drove near the river where there was a murder. He walked over and opened the woman's face, and when he saw he nearly lost consciousness because it was his wife. He could not believe that he ever lost his beloved. This investigation he took over. During the expert committee under the nails, they found the remains of his wife's blood and in their opinion it is the blood of the murderer, apparently she resisted and during the resistance she scratched him. they did an analysis of blood and results are shown in the former policeman Bob. Bob was a former partner Derek. Bob did not like Derek because he was a good cop, and he's always hated Derek.