Bonjour je devais faire un poème en Anglais (thème libre) il fallait 3 strophes de 4 vers..qu'en pensez vous? :) Merci d'avance .

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I imagine a better world !

Where love outperforms the crying.

A world smiling, without trial,

Where nobody will be afraid.


I imagine a welded world.

Everyone is together, without discrimination.

As equal peoples, all the same.

For freedom and peace.


I imagine a loving world.

With lots of smiley face,savoring happiness.

Living with it,

Without pain, without crying.