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Les règles : inventer un super héro en étant original et utiliser des superlatifs et des comparatifs avec des formes différentes

Théana alias Fashion-Girl, is a teenager aged 17 years old, she is the most popular of his high school and because she is prettiest and his clothes are more beautiful than the others. It's THE perfect girl. Théana it was adopted by the richest family in the city. After, she lived with a mother alcoholic and a father obsessed by his job. Her mother was suicide, Théana had 8 years old. His father held her as the only responsible of this murder and he became crazy. One day his father waited hidden behind the door of his room, it knocked him with his baseball bat, he locked in a closet and he put the fire in the house. The fireman arrived at the place and they saved the girl, but they never found the father. This history is not importante for her because she didn't like his parents. The most horrible things that happened to him according to her, it was three years ago, Théana participated a contest, and she drunk a mysterious drink and at the same moment she broke her nail and everybody made fun of her. This tragic envent made him make nightmare. His family was dishonor and they had to move. One day, she felt a strange sensation in her. She looked her nail and she see a rainbow go out of it, and a fabulous dress went out of the rainbow. She put time to understand that with her nail, she gifted with the best super-power, she can creat the most beautiful clothes. She can punish the outlaw, that is to say the people who are badly dressed. For hide his secret, she put a false nail. This is how is born Fashion-Girl. The years passed and his notoriety didn't stop increasing. She is more sought than superman. All the city was stylish, of course there was a few resistants but nothing serious compared to my enemy : Voltare.He want transform the city into an in-fashion city.