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I am writing to talk about the scene in WhiteChapel.
First of all, I am a policeman.
After work at midnight, I saw a man, he was running very quickly.
That day, I had finished quite late.
This man was dressed all in black that is to say, the coat, jacket, trousers and also accessories were black. He was very strange and mysterious.
The atmosphere was gloomy and dangerous.
A few minutes later, I discovered the body of woman on the floor.
Without losing a second I called the ambulance.
The woman was in poor condition.
This woman was dead beause she was not breathing.
I think she has been stabbed by a murderer.
Without losing a second I called the ambulance
Suddently next to this woman, I had found an identity card.
I was surprised because the identity card was probably the killer.

THE INFORMATION HE HAD ABOUT THE MAN:
name: Jack the ripper
Sex: M
size: 1,82
Date of birth: 08/05/1988
Job: surgeon
Nationality: English
number of children: 3
Annual salary: $ 25 M/ year

This man might be the murderer because his job was surgeon.
He must be rich.
But, he may do an organ’s traffic.
The next day with my colleagues we have been researching this killer.
We had finally found him in his office.
He will certainly have fifteen years in prison for harassment and killer.

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I am writing to talk about the scene in WhiteChapel. First of all, I am a policeman. One day, I finished work very late, it was almost midnight and the streets were gloomy and deserted. Suddenly, I saw a man running extremely fast. He was dressed in black from head to toe. He looked a bit strange, and I felt something quite mysterious about him. I decided not to let my curiosity take over me and head home. But then while walking I saw something or maybe someone laying on the floor in the dark. I walked towards it and that's when I saw a woman hurt and bleeding. I took my cellphone out and called the ambulance as fast as possible. I got closer to her, she wasn't moving nor was she breathing and I couldn't hear her heart beat. The lady was already dead. I checked her injury, it looked like someone stabbed her. I looked around her and in her pockets hoping to find an identity and I did. I was surprised because the indentity card was probably the killer's and not her's. THE INFORMATION IT HAD ABOUT THE MAN: name: Jack the ripper Sex: M Height : 1.82 cm Date of birth: 08/05/1988 Job: surgeon Nationality: English number of children: 3 Annual salary: $ 25 M/ year There's a big chance that Jack was the murderer, he's too rich to only be a surgeon. He could be an organ thief. The next day with my colleagues we spent our time investigating the crime, the victim and the suspects. By the end of the day we found our murder and it was Jack the Ripper. This guy will spend over the next decade serving in prison.
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