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Bonjour je dois faire un texte en anglais quelqu'un pourrait t'il me corriger mon texte et voir si il est cohérent, Merci d'avance.

My name is Laurine , in December I get 16, I live in a house in ... with my parents and my brother. I'm in high school (nom du lycée). In life I like to have fun but I also like sometimes remain calm. I often help people, I am their look, I'm polite but very shy. I love making people laugh, biking, strolling with my family. My dream is to go to New Zealand. I'm a fan of Nekfeu is a French singer. My favorite actress is Shailene Woodley, I love the films in which she played such as: Our Stars, diverging ... I love being with my friends, chat with them, shopping with them is really great. I absolutely love dogs, I have a call he Enzo. What I love most is share the thrill, but I do not often go to amusement parks which is a shame. When the weather is ugly I like to stay in my bed watching the series, playing my phone when listening to music. I like the pastry I think its too good, I also like them myself. I also love to read and be with my family.


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bonjour , 
tu est super bon en anglais je trouve !!! 
juste moi j'aurai mis :
I'm a fan of Nekfeu who is a french singer .
ou alors 
I'm a fan of Nekfeu , a french singer .

et aussi 
I have ones and it(ou his je ne sais pas) name is Enzo .
Mais autrement je trouve ce texte super , (je ne suis qu'en seconde aussi)
j'espere que se sera juste ! : )