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Further to your registration form in the competition of kitchen to win the title of starry Leader, we are happy to inform you that your participation was well validated.

Here is some formalities has follow during your participation in competition :

During your adventure, you will be 20 participant from 18 to 35 years old all leader of a restaurant starry. It is for it that you surpassed so will need to earn sum put into play.
Sum has win your restaurant is 10 000 £ to be able to accomplish your plans very for you and.
In order to designer earning him of this competition, several chief cook will judge the kitchen of the participants.
A competition or the perfect workmanship of technology alloyed with creativity pushes the hopes of Gastronomy to surpass itself facing renowned Leaders.

Everything in daytimes the leaders will challenge you to cook according to the culture of different country, it will allow you to enrich your culinary knowledge.
So that all passes correctly, you will take your holding of leader as well as your utensils personnel.
You will work in different places according to the tournament of days, 8 candidates having obtained the best results will be kept for final.

By hoping that you will be present, we arrange to meet you on December 10th for the first test which will take place in our kitchens.
You will find necessary information on our site.

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In the cooking competition*

Here are some formalities to follow*

In the competition*

A starred restaurant*

(je ne comprend pas du tout ce que tu veux dire par ta phrase "it is for it that you surpassed so will need to earn sum put into play")

To be able to accomplish your plans, your restaurant will have to win 10 000£.*

Several cooks will judge the kitchen of the participants in order to choose who is going to win the design prize*

a competition for*

Many challenges are organized, such as a world culinary challenge. Contestants will have to cook inspired by the culinary culture of a country. It will allow you to enrich your culinary knowledge.*

If everything goes well, you will be the leader.*

The day's tournament*

Will be challenging for the finals*

Hoping that you will be with us, we would be glad to meet you on...*

Necessary information on our web-sites*



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