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Bonjour ou Bonsoir à tous Bonne Année.
Alors j'aimerais votre avis sur l'oral d'anglais que j'ai préparer sur la notion Myth & Heroes et aussi me dire si jai beaucoup de fautes Merciii.

The notion which I am going to talk about is the notion of myth and heroes.
To begin with I do like to give the definition of this notion.

Our history was first transmittes orally and often through stories of heroes places and communities to understand a myth is to be interested in heroes and tales that are often the foundations of our society.
Myths are often used to explain the origin of creation of the world to explain certain natural phenomen, to explain certain geographical features.
Myth can be fictional,or partly based on facts.A hero can be a man woman child or even animal.
A Hero can be a person admired for his courage, or for accomplishing the courageous ...
Someone admired for his accomplishment put it to cod accomplishment Political sporting, literary ...
the noble qualities generosity humility selflessness...

To illustrate this notion I am going to prison two characters considered as hero : Charles De Gaulle & Abbe Pierre.

At first we will speak about Charles De Gaulle.
General and Politician he was president of the French republic from 1959 to 1969 is also famous for having being the leader of the Reesie stand from 1940 to 1944.
Why is he a hero ?
In June 1940 Nazi Germany invaded French Republic and occupied half the territory, the government was preparing to sign an armistice with Hitler, for De Gaulle there was no question of making it, he go to London and gave a in the BBC radio to call for resistance ( soldiers, weapons expert, people ...) it is the call of June 18.
De Gaulle then became the leader of free France ( a group of soldiers fighting the nazis until the end of the war) In August, Germany last the war and returned to France where he was welcomed as a hero by All people. He also set up the V Republic and became the first president. In memory of this war hero Prime Minister Jacques Chirac in 1987 renamed the Richelieu aircraft carrier of the French navy by "Charles De Gaulle".

Now I'm going to talk about Abbe Pierre. His real name Henri Grouès.
Henri Grouès was a catholic priest. During the World War 2 he was a resistant and the founder of the Emmaus association during this period he uses 4 consecutive nickname of which Abbe Pierre.
Why is he a hero?
The Emmaus association was founded in 1949 to fight against poverty and exclusion.
It is a figure of the fight against the misery, from 1954 Abbé Pierre is invited in many countries to share his experience ant is involved in multiple fight against the misery and traveled the world. He was nicknamed "The brother of the poor" As early as 1947 he embarked on many federalist organization such as the M.U.C.M (mouvement universel pour une fédération mondiale) with the aim of preserving place in the world.
He died on January 22 in 2007, its ideology to fight the misery remains and continues through the association Abbe Pierre.

To conclude, the two heroes, I choose allowed the French society to have an ideal, it is two great characters is an example for a society that develops in respect, courage and help.


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Salut !

C'est pas trop grave.

Voici quelques corrections à faire :

* Paragraphe 1 => Ce sera mieux de mettre ( To begin, I would like to define this notion.)

* Paragraphe 2 =>  Au lieu de : ...put it to cod accomplishment...., je pense que c'est plutôt : ...put it to code accomplishment...

* Paragraphe 3 => Mettez de préférence : To illustrate this notion I will consider characters as heroes : Charles de Gaulles & Abbe Pierre.

* Paragraphe 4 => He goes to London and gave a.....(il vous manque un mot ici)...in the BBC Radio...

* To share his experience and is involved...











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