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‘’ Do you walk or take the car ? ‘’
So I’m take both.
I’m gonna to talk about why It’s better to walk than to take the car.

First of all , to walk It’s good for our health, simple way to integrate physical activity in our daily routine and help you stay in shape.
To walk It’s the best exercise for the mental and physical health.
Secondly, we save and reduce pollution. I know take the car It’s more easy than walk because It makes It possible to move very easily with little effort, It allows easy movement of objects and shopping but the car is the single most polluting means of transport.. For less pollution it is preferable to take the publics transports, bike or just walk.
Finally, I walk more than I take the car because my school is not far away.

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So I take both. 
I’m gonna  talk about why It’s better to walk than to take the car.

First of all , walking Is good for our health, it’s a simple way to integrate physical activity in our daily routine and help you stay in shape.
 Walking Is the best exercise for the mental and physical health. 
Secondly, we save and reduce pollution. I now take the car because It’s more easy than walking because It makes It possible to move very easily with little effort, It allows easy movement of objects and shopping but the car is the single most polluting means of transport.. For less pollution it is preferable to take the publics transports, bike or just walk.
Finally, I walk more than I take the car because my school is not far away.


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